The Untamable Sea (Part 1)
While the questions whispers all around you like those restless spirits that refuse to remain within whatever unhallowed ground and shallow grave- To have to try to bury them again and again... What...
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Quote:'Too rough,' he mentally scolded himself for being an as, I stumbled a bit between characters because I think it seems a bit pressed. I also had a difficult time settling into the piece itself....
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Thank you kindly Firefly... actually, this was kind of a in-between tale, in that I was writing something else when I wrote this (could likely also explain some of the gray areas as well). This was...
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BTW, Po, I owe you an apology. I broke the cardinal rule, it seems. I just read the rules (on my own accord as I was just perusing the board) and my sincerest apologies. To give a good critique...
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No, I wasn't offended by your reply at all Firefly; and, at any rate, I would much prefer an honest response. I didn't think there was anything in your original post that was offensive in the...
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